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Give in, Roll on (a poet's porn)
joga
It’s foolish and low-key	1
the underneath beseeched	2
give in, give it up	3
give in	4
to me.	5

Sweating and parched	6
you breathe in, I breathe out	7
hold it in, hold out	8
hold it in	9
for me.	10

Circling like a predator	11
picking on its prey	12
pull out, push in	13
pull out	14
of me.	15

Bed sheets scream for mercy	16
they’ll get no sympathy here	17
feel flow, feel it go	18
feel flow	19
into me.	20

Drenched with heavy breathing	21
burning lips and scratch marks	22
roll on, roll off	23
roll on	24
with me.	25
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