poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

When will you return
unknown

She is not the sun,
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nor do stars shine in her eyes.
 2
Flowers are not in bloom
 3
at her every step.
 4
 
 
Her voice is not enchanting,
 5
nor is her skin velvet  
 6
No moons light her hair in delicate silver streaks,
 7
she is unresponsive.
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She sleeps all day
 9
and does not eat,
 10
she no longer washes
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and the pills increase.
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I miss her, but what can I do
 13
She is depressed.
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