poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Random Poem:

gastrointestinal
MywrdsRmyAiR

Sharp-
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        like needles clawing at my innerds.
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Gagging and heaving;
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[the site of me causes my retching].
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Cow.
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[i'm a] fat cow.
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Wish i could
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         dissapear into thin air.
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See me.
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See the toilet.
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       It's right next to me;
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and i'm on [the floor].
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Blood.
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       Lot's of it.
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Mine. Everywhere.
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[Spilling over] the rim.
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Peace at last.
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              And shedding those pounds.
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