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Random Poem:

When You Marry Me
thegalester

I will carry three armbabies
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under the crook of my elbow,
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and shine with promised bleached
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hair under a heating bulb.
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I will play the trombone outside
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on our front porch and, in a Wyeth moment,
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I will step outside without any clothes on
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and sing Amazing Grace while tying
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the emerald curtains outside.
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I will want sport trashcans, a green typewriter,
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and six lobster traps for when we go to Maine.
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We will have a blue boat,
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and carry lobsters on our clothing.
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Your parents will fry fish
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in a big tick pot beside the rocks and the seafoam,
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and we will watch as our babies carry shells on their fingers.
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We will know Spain finally,
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and you will have three languages under your belt --
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pero no sabré dónde los aprendiste.
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You and I will feed deer in the State Park
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and I will wear a kerchief on my head, despite your jokes.
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Just like the Hughes's
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we will mask ourselves with words
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and dark green sea and in the evening,
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after making love, you will leave my side and find
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one more ocean to be under.
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You might return and find me asleep in our bed,
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our baby under my arm, and you will watch us sleep in green.
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