poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Valentine and Other Illusions
Isabelle5

Token gestures -
 1
a handshake,
 2
a grin,
 3
a sly hand
 4
sliding up
 5
a skirted leg.
 6
 
 
That’s love
 7
on Valentine’s Day,
 8
for the lonely souls
 9
who play at love
 10
but cannot find
 11
the edges,
 12
like chasing eggshells
 13
in a bowl of cream.
 14
 
 
Sometimes
 15
I catch
 16
a glimpse,
 17
a taste,
 18
 
 
just enough
 19
to cause
 20
my heart
 21
to flutter,
 22
 
 
conveniently
 23
forgetting
 24
that heart attacks
 25
also begin
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(and end)
 27
that way.
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