poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Dali's Car
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Upturned cans,rusty,holed,revolve on bleached poles.
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Sand blasted boney skeletal fingers scrawl on a sign,
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"Camiso Spring this way", along the tyre tracks of abandoned vehicle lines.
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Up ahead,beneath blazing skies,giraffes and winged tigers
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morph into amoeba shapes, while time melts into the desert floor.
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There stands Dali's car,doors wide open,luminous,preposterous
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pink and gleaming six wheeled Cadillac, twin turbine engine idling
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while antennae wave theatrically, sticking out of bloated decayed limbs
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that stalk themselves through dried up water holes, crunching
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fossilised fish underfoot. Inside,stylish leopard skin upholstery roars
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while the speed claws at 80 M.P.H. Landscapes hurtles past motionless
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as seconds pass in days. A pimp sways over the horizon searching for prey
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Mae West on holiday,swings her white parasol in the sun,
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plucks the last grape off a withered vine,eats,spits pips,
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into a glass of moonshine wine,calls to her maid,
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"Beulah!" then steps aside. The car passes, night falls.
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