poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

starin' at the world through my rearview
wendz

that's what i've been doing for so long,
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just staring at the world through my rear view
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only this time it's raining
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and i know that i can stop
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the sky weeping,
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but i don't know how.
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look for me when i dream, my friend;
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you're the only one who can save me.
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read my mind, tell me what to do
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coz i know that there's a whole new world
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which doesn't belong to me, yet -
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i want to see what you see,
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feel what you feel..
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that night we kicked back and
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put our feet up, watching the clouds pass by
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through your sunroof, the warm night,
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lightless but brighter than any day -
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i almost thought that it'd never end,
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just you and i,
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flying over a cliff,
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smiling at each other
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telepathically.
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