poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

Love served for two and no one else
turtlepoet

I had dreams
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of wolves
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on the chests of stallions
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and moonlit paths
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showered in rays of sunshine
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and the smiles of the world.
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I had dreams
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of escalators
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and retards kissing
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the mentally challenged.
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I had nightmares
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of purity
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and fantasies of pain.
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I have dreams
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of you
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sleeping on my chest
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and the journey
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that brings us pure bliss
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in the eyes of the blind.
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I have dreams
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of time
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standing still as we are blind
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to our own passionate idiocrity.
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I had nightmares
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of purity
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and fantasies of pain.
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I'll never be the same.
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