poetry critical

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Random Poem:

that's great, darling.
FrayedSkirt

Last night your lips let loose turmoil for me,
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But none for you as your eyes sparkled with admiration and excitement,
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But darling, I always knew you wanted to land among the stars
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Of Broadway— streets lined with men with top hats, enormous bellies,
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And chunky backpockets that could only be explained by wealth,
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burlesque houses,
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Dancing women, the naked cowboy,
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the talented, the damned,
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and, of course, our sweet Lea Salonga,
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Who inspired you to go there in the first place.
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Without my inquiries, you sketched your future life out for me,
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How sweet, I thought, but words tripped over one another
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As you spelled out your expectations in New York,
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Eagerly you explained to me how busy your life would be,
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What with your day-to-day auditions,
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Your acting, singing, dancing workshops,
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And maybe even kissing classes,
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But you were still engaged with your road to fame,
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You finally turned to me and asked me,
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“What do you think hunny?”
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I bit my lower lip, uncertain of what to say,
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I only wanted to make you happy so I murmured:
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“That’s great darling.”
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But, what I really meant to say was:
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“Where do I fit in all of this?”
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