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I'll Never Let Her Go
JoeDMoffett
I don’t think she understands	1
She’ll never truly know	2
How much I really love her	3
And I’ll never let her go	4

I’ve walked the lonely road	5
My feelings dark and black	6
But now I’ve lost my heaven	7
This sent me to hell and back	8

She’s showed me the way	9
She’s opened up the door	10
She’s shown me what is real	11
She’s taught me how to soar	12

Nothing’s been so great	13
Scars of love we can’t ignore	14
That she’s given me something real	15
That I can live for	16

Her love can not be bought	17
Never found in any store	18
But it’s always hypnotizing	19
Bringing me to her like a lore	20

I need to be different	21
Our fights our like a war	22
But I’ve waited to long	23
She doesn’t want me anymore	24

We’ve spilled so much anger	25
And blood, a pool of red	26
To try and make things better	27
So our love will not be dead	28

I think I am too late	29
She hated the words I said	30
I know I did her wrong	31
Our love held by a thread	32

I can’t believe she did it	33
Made me fall in love so fast	34
I wish she’d love forever	35
But her feeling’s in the past	36

Her love was like a spell	37
She felt she had to cast	38
It ripped apart my heart	39
Like stabbed with broken glass	40

I’m living in my pain	41
I’m fucked up in a lie	42
I love her so damn much	43
It makes me want to die	44

I put away my pain	45
But it can never hide	46
I never want to say	47
That this is our goodbye	48

I need her in my life	49
Losing her just makes me cry	50
And though she hates me now	51
My love will not deny	52

She is my whole damn life	53
No reason to ask why	54
She makes me feel so happy	55
To relieve me with a sigh	56

Her presence makes me smile	57
Her kiss can get me high	58
Yet I love her too damn much	59
I can’t help that I’m that guy	60

She’s better than a holiday	61
Christmas to the 4th of July	62
And if I ever need help	63
She’ll be there to rely	64

She’s beautiful and simple	65
From her neck down to her thighs	66
And when she says she loves me	67
I believe that I can fly	68


There is no simple message	69
That I can just imply	70
But I need her in my life	71
And for her love to apply	72

I know I’ll never leave her	73
I know I’m not okay	74
I will never stop loving her	75
In my perfect kind of way	76

She never asks for much	77
But when she asks I must obey	78
Because I’d do anything	79
For her to love and stay	80

I left her there before	81
By her shallow bay	82
Now she’s left me there	83
In my own dismay	84

Her face is just amazing	85
No normal shown display	86
Of any portrait or picture	87
Better than any Monet	88

If I could change my past	89
There’d be nothing here to say	90
She’d love me and I’d love her	91
Each and everyday	92

When she walks toward me	93
Time just seems to slow	94
She puts a smile on my face	95
From her heavenly glow	96

I’d walk a million miles	97
In rain, hail, sleet, or snow	98
To present to her my love	99
It’s all I have to show	100

I don’t think she understands	101
She’ll never truly know	102
How much I really love her	103
And I’ll never let her go	104


Until death do us part	105
Let my feelings for you show	106
Our Love will last forever,	107
Brooke, I’ll never let you go	108
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