poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

Mocha-Chino Baby
Faulk

I once knew a girl; beautiful as could be
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Of all the boys to choose from, she decided to choose me
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Her skin was like an angel, softer than the finest silk
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And of a color wonderful, double mocha with some milk
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Oh my mocha-chino baby, you filled my life with light
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For you I would do anything, I would brave the toughest fight
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I would box with a tornado; I would wrestle with a storm
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The blizzard winds would run from me, making Cold December warm
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I would scale the highest mountain; I would climb the tallest tree
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I would swim straight through a hurricane, if that would bring you back to me
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I miss your smile, your hugs, your laugh; I miss you terribly
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But what I really miss the most, is just your company
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