poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

soaking
wendz

the air's dense with water droplets,
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pavement still radiating heat from the day before.
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the sidewalk melts the bottom of my rubber flip flops,
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nape hairs slick against my neck.
 4
 
 
we stand, his arm slung across my shoulders
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casually, like a wilted stick of new year's pepperoni
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or a half hearted trudge to the deli.
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it's listless,
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thunder chasing the underbelly of heavy clouds,
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frowning and threatening to batter roofs, the city buildings.
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somewhere in the distance,
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lightning punches the tops of 'scrapers,
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skids over water and flickers out into obscurity.
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through branches,
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magnesium burns in the shape of gerbera flowers,
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explode into the sky, rains down, torrents and torrents of
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colours, lights, the smell of gunpowder heavy in the night.
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some sky god decides that enough's enough,
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prods at the giant mass covering the moon:
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splatters of relief hail down, fogging my glasses,
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caught in his eyelashes and it would have been perfect
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if we'd stood there and gotten drenched in the downpour.
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