poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Error Of Arrogance
wboyette

What'ere tomorrow holds in store
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Believe with all your soul
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That your are Captain of your ship,
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Commander of your fate.
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E'en though you try to be so hard
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It's not about control
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Whether your perceptions' flawed
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Is subject for debate
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Perfection in it's human form
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Will ever only be
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Personified in He who bore
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Our sins with silent love
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Assuring with this sacrifice
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The chance for you and me
 14
To scream impotent epithets
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For the "unfairness" of
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This earthly life for which He paid
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The ransom of His blood
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So such as we would never have to bear
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Through life alone
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The burden of imagining that meager effort could
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With wanton disregard undo what God has done.
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So, while you strive to gain control
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Until the end of days
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I, content, submit my will
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To He who bore my Cross.
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If you would seek redemption,
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Merely close your eyes and pray
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Have Faith in Him and you will never be
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Completely lost.
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Jesus Believes in you!.
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