poetry critical

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Random Poem:

a spider bite
collyrium

stretched out in fiction,
 1
you and i filled this blank bed
 2
like a page, cluttered with words
 3
too quickly erased to wipe clean,
 4
and the wind blew our shavings
 5
into thinning air, my throat collapsed,
 6
then my blood fell silently to sleep,
 7
as though you had a big magic marker
 8
to slowly black my name from your mind,
 9
but i remember how these walls swelled
 10
with passion, creating us a world to define,
 11
and we divined just how to live once,
 12
painting the moment without the past,
 13
disregarding what might come of us,
 14
deciding what we were and where we fit
 15
into what we could have made so easily
 16
you'd persuade my rich mind to sleep
 17
where my eyes would rest on your horizon
 18
and we'd collapse into my bed
 19
comforting the comforters with love
 20
or what we called it at the time
 21
until the dream fell broken in sweat,
 22
and i gasped, jolting into tomorrow, without you
 23
covered in goosebumps that swallowed me whole
 24
until the daze passed on, and the light swilled,
 25
carousing through the window with empty tones,
 26
and for once, i didn't want to rise to the occasion
 27
i wanted to drink myself dry with honesty,
 28
because this time, i really fell in love,
 29
and i know that you're doing the same
 30
this song's what you get when you say what you say,
 31
leaving me lifeless in love you requite conveniently,
 32
pushing me out while you ask me to stay,
 33
staying up for conclusions to rub the right way,
 34
saving up for a time you'll be able to say
 35
the words you already feel without question
 36
so that you can leave unlocked your doors,
 37
and let what comes in all the way,
 38
without wondering if it will hurt you
 39
god, i held that double-edged sword
 40
like some herculean fool in grecian myth
 41
stealing fire from the sky sent chills along my spine
 42
until these goosebumps turned to spider bites,
 43
and you were the itch i had to scratch
 44

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