poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Evolution Bricks
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In the year man invented brick,
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and the quick setting cement
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that hardened in his heart,
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his properties became fixed and calculated,
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he looked to his brother with a meaner eye,
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used the rope to mark and measure,
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ten years work for twenty leisure.
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He cordoned to appropriate,
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placing laws decorating all extremities of land,
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and still expanding, bought portions of cloud,
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to seal in huge wrap- a- rounds.
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Sold them into deserts, making dams that held the  flood  
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stirring thickening vapors  through gigantic  pools of mud.
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Made the blood red bricks ,built the half baked towns
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with which all deserts now abound, and man saw that it was good.
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