poetry critical

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Random Poem:

more than a lifetime
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and the feelings keep on dwelling
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in a mind that overflows
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with lovely thoughts of your touch
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and the miles just keep rolling
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in a distance that seems
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far too much
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but i don't think you seem to realize
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that the dreams that are dreamnt
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just may not come true.
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and a smile's just a smile
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unless you make it something greather,
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oh won't you?
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Those were the 3 seconds that i lived for
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and in a heartbeat i would live once more
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but i can't get to you
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you're more than a lifetime away.
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i'd pull the sky down to the earth
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and make waves crash on your shore
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would that be good enough for you?
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or would you insist that I do more?
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Well i'd live a lifetime for your touch
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and die in a heartbeat for your kiss
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but would you insist on something more
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than this girl tha's in love more than
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you'll ever know?
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I'd live a lifetime or more, in love with you
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and i'd live a lifetime once more if  you'd love me too.
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